the west hills fog rolls
over waking mind
sweet into autumn
calm perspective held innate
gift of northern hemisphere
the yearly journey takes breath
hiding beneath leaves
rain dampens the light
sky clears brisk and bright
4 responses to “West Hill Roll”
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This has meditative qualities…very calming…I like it. I do wish I had your Autumn…mine’s coming in far too warm thus far. Happy poeting! 🙂
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Thank you for your feedback, I appreciate that you wrote. I wish your fall to cool and trees to shift soon.
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I like the vivid details of your words – particularly enjoyed the image of rain hiding beneath leaves…
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Thank you so much for your feedback. Not a true haiku, but playing around with form is fun. Happy October and writing to you.
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